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Comments for 'Halo 2: The Forgotten-Part Two' |
Nusty
6:04 am | January 11, 2004
I really liked your story. You're an awesome writer and it would be interesting to see more stories with these characters.
There were a few spelling errors and such though, but like Hawk said, just proof read, and use spell/grammar checkers.
lol Don't feel bad, I'm the same way and have to do it like two or three times before I get everything.
Good job. =)
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draGUN_03
5:51 am | December 18, 2003
lol...well thnx all 4 liking it, but can some1 plz tell me the name 4 the Battle Rifle (like the AR is the MA5B)
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CoLd BlooDed
4:03 pm | December 17, 2003
Good story, I liked it. Take Hawks advice. 8.5/10
P.S -Heh heh, my middle name is Wilson.
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Hawk7886
3:18 am | December 16, 2003
Even though they were spread out, the errors were abundant. Try running it through a good spell/grammar checker before proofreading. It won't take them all out, but hopefully the proofreading will.
8/10
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tony
11:28 pm | December 15, 2003
good I liked it
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