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alpal
10:23 am | July 27, 2003
not bad what year was this set and how old is john
Hidden Assassin
11:11 am | July 24, 2003
Next time indent.
Da Mann
4:12 am | July 24, 2003
Hmmm. Dr. Halsey looking like something out of attack of the nerds and John as a problem child. Sounds like you're cutting John-117 to be a troubled hero like Spider-Man. Good story. (Isn't Dr. Halsey supposed to be pretty as described in FOR?)
Elfster
3:57 am | July 24, 2003
you always know you're in for a great, exctiting, action-packed thriller when the fan fic you're reading is something like "Untitled Document".

I thought this was gonna be a piece of shit but its actually pretty good, why doesnt it have a title?
Jinkaiden
10:46 pm | July 23, 2003
By the way, what year does this take place?

Jinkaiden
Jinkaiden
10:44 pm | July 23, 2003
No title...?

Jinkaiden
'Nosolee
6:25 pm | July 23, 2003
8.5/10. Some minor grammar, spelling and punctuation errors. Remember to capitalize John.


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