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Comments for 'Earth Reawakened Part II'



Buster
9:25 pm | June 2, 2004
Nice story. First chapter wasn't crappy. But I have to agree with Guardian, do some proof-reading before you decide to post it, little mistakes are still mistakes. But yes, good story.
Guardian
5:02 pm | May 30, 2004
HAHAHAHAHA you fool you messed up with the Sargent talking...its ok, i 7/10 tops is what i'll give you. Proof read it, get someone else to read it, like someone who is a good writer and then tweak it and then post it.


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