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Comments for 'The Patrol - Part II' |
MIKEH
4:26 pm | July 20, 2004
I Thought that it worked well with the first. Keep up the good work.
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Dave Luck
6:45 pm | July 19, 2004
Yeah, I know the feeling MCC. Sometimes I wish the Warthog had a horn, and sometimes I wish you could remotely fire the gun from the steering wheel. Well, you can't have everything in life, that's the way it goes....
- Dave.
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DanH
12:21 pm | July 19, 2004
That's a part of my plan to rule the world
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!@#$
10:35 am | July 19, 2004
I want part 3 because the ending kept me wanting for more.
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Michael Pineapple
9:50 pm | July 18, 2004
Very good Dan.
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D.C!
5:35 pm | July 18, 2004
Intense stuff Dan Harris, very sweet read.
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MC's Cousin
4:41 pm | July 18, 2004
All hale the code!
Anyway, always give your stories the care they deserve. Make time, and give it time. Can't make next update? Give it time anyway, your story will show it.
I wish that in Halo, you could fire a weapon while driving, at least on straitaways. And throw grenades too. Oh how handy that would be in a Ghost at times.
Plus, it's just too bad you didn't use one of those nifty new Halo 2 'Hogs. You could have picked the men up, and gone back. But...
Signing Off
MCC
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Locke cole
4:39 pm | July 18, 2004
I liked it alot the guys in the warthog was really cool...I cant wait for the actionpacked part 3
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DanH
3:27 pm | July 18, 2004
Yea I thought this one might not be as good as the first. I wrote it pretty quickly, I probably should have taken more time with it.
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Slit Throat
3:14 pm | July 18, 2004
I dunno; it didn't have the flowing feeling that the last one did. Also, Marine should be capitalized all the time.
7/10
You used the code! :)
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