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Comments for 'Halo: The Forerunner Chronicles Chapter II - The High Council' |
MasterChief21
4:12 pm | July 4, 2002
Its a pretty good story so far. A few to many gramar errors, and a lot of liberties were taken, but is still pretty good. I'm finding it hard to believe that the Chief would use that much language though. He doesnt curse in the game or book, so i would watch it a bit with the profanities, but other than these, they series is good.
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saturn
4:15 am | July 4, 2002
really cool with the forerunner pissed at him. That's unique but very realistic. Who would like anyone destroying their house or project without asking?
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Living_Sacrifice86
3:48 am | July 4, 2002
Good so far few small mistakes like Knightmare Wolf said they can really hurt your story sometimes so watch them otherwise great
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Knightmare Wolf
1:19 am | July 4, 2002
Good, but a lot of small errors... Be careful with that, and if u havent already read that article on uh... documents or whatever
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Cultivated Human
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Neato.
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Nike
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
It's simple, Dark Army: He changed his feelings.
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Dark Army
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
how can john go from being pissed to start joking at the end of the story???
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Archangels Blade
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
You have a point, Killa_Snypa7. I wouln't really like gettin' fried by electrodes i can't even see. You have a point.
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Jaywhit10
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Nice story, i like everything about this. I really liked the personalities. Nice work keep it up
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killa_snypa7
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
im kinda giving the Chief my personality at that time...but gimme a break, wouldnt you be kinda off the wall throwing out every bad wor din the dictionary at that time when these robots that can tear holes in ships just stand around and watch your race get destroyed?
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