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Comments for 'Only One Soldier'



Mainevent
4:43 am | December 19, 2003
The secret word is: Stanza
Arthur Wellesly
3:38 am | December 19, 2003
I like it, but the last two paragraphs or whatever they're called in poems needed work in my opinion. Of course, I couldn't write a poem like that if my life depended on it, so kudos.
teemus
4:23 am | December 18, 2003
It was decent. Your last one was better though.
Walker
3:45 am | December 18, 2003
Same as Mainevent. But still good. Keep 'em coming.
CoLd BlooDed
2:03 am | December 18, 2003
Ok guys, lol some of you read my story for Fight for New Tatley, it hasn't got any reviews. =(
SOSO.Odin
10:03 pm | December 17, 2003
yeah i liked ur last one better bro
but great job anyway man
just keep pumpin em out
CovieKilla
8:53 pm | December 17, 2003
pretty good pretty good...sumthin didnt feel rite though and I cant put my finger on it...hmm...8/10
Mainevent
6:27 pm | December 17, 2003
It was okay. But not as good as your last one.
Helljumper
4:50 pm | December 17, 2003
that was ill, i liked it, when u gonna come out with a new series cold blooded, i like your style of writing.


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