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Comments for 'Spartans in NYC'



SammyK
12:32 am | July 2, 2003
first time Spartans have a real attitude. Sam and his crew sounded more like marines than spartans. Just my take, but I like the change.
Shadowrunner
9:43 am | June 29, 2003
Despite the fact that Master Chief more or less is the last SPARTAN soldier, you do have a good story up your sleeves. Keep it up!

Make sure to make chapter 2 longer, mkay?
Spookybanana29
2:44 pm | June 28, 2003
It's good, but it was a little short...i'd give it a 9/10

Keep up the good work!
AlphaBravo343
6:00 am | June 28, 2003
Good stuff, just use the indent, and start a new line when someone new speaks.
Ishkabibbl
8:47 pm | June 27, 2003
I'd like to see another Spartan take out a whole armada again...would be sorta interesting, considering the explosion of halo did it...


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