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Comments for 'A New Beginning Part Two' |
Bryce
12:47 pm | March 13, 2003
Ok, i'll try that next time, sorry!
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Blake
5:14 pm | March 12, 2003
nice storyline. Overall pretty good except for a few typos. Looking forward to part 3!
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monitor101
3:18 am | March 12, 2003
Why don't you try making paragraphs but otherwise pretty kool.
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