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Comments for 'The Rookie - Chapter 1 - The Pillar of Autumn'



The British Commando
11:22 am | April 5, 2002
I should have read it through again before I submitted it, I just noticed a few mistakes....
shootme45
12:27 am | April 5, 2002
u do a very good job, i think that this is a good start for a great story.
shaka-dude
12:36 pm | April 4, 2002
Doesn't suck at all. Good start, keep it up!
max3949
12:20 pm | April 4, 2002
IF this is your first fanfic, great job, ya.
Tursas
12:23 am | April 4, 2002
Good work. I hope to see more.
Jaywhit10
10:03 pm | April 3, 2002
it's good don't worry


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