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Comments for 'Halo 2: Part 1, Taking Over'



Burny
7:26 pm | April 12, 2004
If you could straighten out a few facts and read the halo novels, this would be a great beginning to a Halo 2 novelization.

8.0/10
CoLd BlooDed
3:18 am | April 12, 2004
Or simply saying that the armor is thick might give him an idea . . . ;)
Nick Kang
10:19 am | April 11, 2004
If MC taped , like, a really, really, really big pile of grenades to the hull it might dent it. That gives you an idea of how thick the armor is.
Wiley
7:37 pm | April 10, 2004
IT wasn't too bad, but it lacked flow, and the spelling was bad. You also mneed a new paragraph whenever someone new speaks.

It jupde forme one thing too another without explaining much, it was like: hes shot the grunt. Then he looked around the corner. etc.

try and explain stuff more fully and you'll be good

7.5/10
Mainevent
4:26 pm | April 10, 2004
A MAC round can punch the hell out of the Covenant armor, it's the shield it can't get through. But he has a point. A grenade can't do crap against a tank, much less a cruiser. Hell I doubt they'd even know one went off.
Nick Kang
11:02 am | April 10, 2004
Overall this was good. Although I have no idea where the Chief would get a piece of tape while falling through space. And I highly doubt a single frag grenade could breach the hull of a Covie cruiser. I mean, a MAC round can barely do it. Other than that and a few gramatical errors it was good.

9.0/10


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