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Comments for 'The Mind of a Covenant Elite'



Black Titan
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
By the way, the elite in this story was stationed on the Unyeilding Hierophant, just so you know what happened him.
spanish spartan
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
ZERO OUT OF TEN BOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
spanish spartan
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
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Helljumper
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
I thought it was ok

ODST
343 Salty Beans
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
One of the lines sounded a little like a Bible verse...

Anyway, pretty good. Don't worry about Mexican Spartan and his Cardboard MJOLNIR armor.

343SB
Dave Luck
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Okay, one thing. The people who mindlessly say "Zero of ten" And don't take the time to type properly, are n00bs.

I'd say this is a good poem. I like it. Very complete and to-the-point. And Black Titan, I think that is very funny. No, I mean, completely hilarious. The Elite who took all this trouble to get promoted to Gold is now well, uh, atoms. Atoms, protons, and neutrons. And Electrons.

Ouchies.

- Dave

P.S There are no ratings here, because I do not rate poems.
Solidus Snake
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
I didn't think it was good. Didn't really flow...
white grunt
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
great poem
Sentinel
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Okay, I guess. I wouldn't know how to rate this.
Black Titan
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Thank you all for the advice (accept spanish spartan). Ill keep up the work.


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