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Comments for 'Another ONI Black File: Halo – We Got There First: Part 7'



Wiley
9:12 pm | August 28, 2003
Don't worry, I'll be patient.
Arthur Wellesly
10:30 pm | August 26, 2003
No problem.
Wado
7:42 pm | August 26, 2003
I actually have two chapters more almost finished for Eternal Sunder but I just don't like the way they read. So please be patient, they will come someday. In the mean time, I'm been really busy with a different long term Halo writing project with someone else outside of Fan Fiction. Hope to see some of that soon if all goes well.

And Arthur, sorry to using your comment space here for my chatting. Thanks for your understanding.
monitor101
4:35 pm | August 26, 2003
Great story awesome I love the ship-to-ship combat awesome way of describing a hectic situation on board a ship 10/10!
Wiley
2:51 pm | August 26, 2003
Hey, Wado, are you ever going to finish those Eternal Sunder stories or should I just give up hope?
Arthur Wellesly
7:28 pm | August 25, 2003
Uh... because the ship was active the amount of EMP and radiation emitting from the ship prevented any such hacking from a safe distance. Plus it was necessary for the plot :).
Wado
6:54 pm | August 25, 2003
Excellent job. Keep it up.

I only have one question, the story flowed so quickly, did the "robots" ever try to hack into the ship systems like how 343 GS hacked into the POA? That seems a logical attack vector for them to control the ship systems and prevent things such as self-destruction, they obviously had access to the ship's schematics. But hey, no big deal, the story was still very cool.
Wiley
6:39 pm | August 25, 2003
About time.
9.75/10


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