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Comments for 'Birth of New Heroes: Chapter 1'



DragonReborn
8:58 pm | April 27, 2004
Hate to say it... but I hated it. I got about 5 paragraphs down, and nobody talks to to anyone in ONI like that. And you mispelt descends twice in the first paragraph. I just couldn't read anymore. And most ONI operatives hate Spartans to their bones.
Arinoth Koby
5:40 pm | April 26, 2004
All the 5 names are taken from my actual Halo clan. From the 5 members to include them all in since we are the Shadow Spartans
Snowy Duck
11:56 am | April 26, 2004
good

1 question. you have the names blood wolf and ares, and then you have stirfry...that could be a joke but, keep personal jokes personal.
The Razor
7:17 am | April 25, 2004
Well not so god as the last one but pretty god.


5/10 :)
The REAL Nick Kang
1:19 pm | April 24, 2004
OMFG Shawn...
Nick Kang
1:12 pm | April 24, 2004
ur story is horrible i cant believe you wrote it! Dumb Faget


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