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Comments for 'Rebirth - Shadow's Chapter 2 - Revelation'



scope
12:25 am | June 1, 2003
poor sarge
Jaywhit10
3:16 pm | May 31, 2003
I like the way this is going, u make it up w/o the fight scenes but when reading ur story w/o them it just feels like theres a empty spot there, all in all good work....8 school days left and then i can actually use the comp when i want and i can finish my series....priorities priorities.....
Knightmare(MM
11:58 am | May 31, 2003
Bad memories, huh?
Of what exactly..?
Sarge
3:20 am | May 31, 2003
Bad memories...bad memories...
scope
7:57 pm | May 30, 2003
10/10 I love this no complaints here
monitor101
4:24 am | May 30, 2003
Great story wicked good writing!
Shadow
1:01 am | May 30, 2003
Don't worry Ender, I have one chapter in the making with endless action. It won't be the next one, but it will come soon enough. Patience.
Shadow
1:01 am | May 30, 2003
Don't worry Ender, I have one chapter in the making with endless action. It won't be the next one, but it will come soon enough. Patience.
Knightmare(MM
12:27 am | May 30, 2003
Look, Ender... don't harp Shadow out yet. He didn't say there wouldn't be any, just less of it.
ender trick
10:03 pm | May 29, 2003
i am very disapointed i havent even read it yet and the first paragraph steers me to have doubts the action scenes are whaty made the storys good dont lose that yo have a great way to portray action and mayhem try not to lose it... now its time to read... so long
Wiley Kimball
9:12 pm | May 29, 2003
Great, keep it up. I also like the ::.
9/10
Boa
7:08 pm | May 29, 2003
Cool. Liked the way the Covie language was in ::.


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