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Comments for 'Unknown Apprentice' |
apache119
10:26 pm | June 27, 2003
This website is just another opportunity to get published on the web. Another reason is that I like halo and there alot of good fan fiction stories on here so I thought I would see if mine got good reviews.
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Anonymous
10:19 pm | June 27, 2003
"absolutly nothing to do with halo"
Do you have a reason that you posted it here in particular?
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apache119
10:06 pm | June 27, 2003
I admit that this story has absolutly nothing to do with halo. This story does not expand on the halo universe, and it is also not placed in an alternate universe. I still ponder why halo.bungie.org posted this, But I am glad all the same. Thanks for the good reviews. Stay tuned for the continuation of Unknown Aprentice.
P.S= Everybody should read Slow to Perfection. that story even beats this one.
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monitor101
9:57 pm | June 27, 2003
apache119 dude stop writing my comments lol see ya around!
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monitor101
8:31 pm | June 27, 2003
I dont remember writing my last comment?
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Corey Lyon(Cougar)
7:51 pm | June 27, 2003
WOW! what can I say. First of all i'd like to point out that this was in fact a very well written piece and second is that you brought something that no one else has. I've read alot of stories, but none compare to what you did. Yes you probley thought about Halo, but you modified it into an alternate universe. The only other story that did this,I think, was "Slow to Perfection". Very Good Job. 100/10 :)
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Wiley K.
5:20 pm | June 27, 2003
Good.
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monitor101
1:10 am | June 27, 2003
I am still going to be writing. the virus will be continued.
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Wiley K.
9:59 pm | June 26, 2003
Cool, so you still goanna be writing?
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monitor101
4:39 pm | June 26, 2003
Well Wiley I'm back!
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apache119
4:39 pm | June 26, 2003
the next instalment is coming soon.
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ThreadedAce3
1:42 am | June 26, 2003
it was good for a start. Proofread before you submit... there were a few words used wrongly. Other than that, it was good. Keep writing.
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wiley
10:24 pm | June 25, 2003
Sorry, this just isn't my day, see comments section for the Pelican story and you'll understand
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Wiley K.
8:29 pm | June 25, 2003
I thought you were leaving moniter101.
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Phoenix
7:53 pm | June 25, 2003
great story 10/10
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apache119
7:06 pm | June 25, 2003
There is alot more to this story yet to be revealed. I know it has nothing to do with halo but I think that this story is kind of like it because there are modified humans and the modified humans were also recruited with no choice, just like John, or the Master Chief. Wiley K. Im glad you liked it. You can also read this story at fanfiction.net, if you are interested. stay tuned and read more.
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monitor101
7:06 pm | June 25, 2003
It has a lot to do with Halo I'm sure Wiley it may be a story that explores the halo universe one that pushes it's limits to the very edge so don't push it Wiley? Great story Apache keep them coming this is by far one of the best fanfics HBO has seen in a long time! 11/10
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Ishkabibbl
4:53 pm | June 25, 2003
I guess the whole modified human thing, but beyond that...um...yeah..
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Wiley K.
4:01 pm | June 25, 2003
And this has WHAT to do with Halo?
It was good though, 9/10
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