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Comments for 'part V: Black Night Squadron' |
Havok
2:33 am | May 1, 2003
great story, excellent idea with the gunships. send the nex one out soon.
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AlphaBravo343
11:11 am | April 28, 2003
Well, if you liked this one, then you should read my other ones. This is the Death from Above series by the way. I forgot to put in the series name. And I should have another one done by thursday.
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Shadow Spartan
10:10 pm | April 27, 2003
holy crap, i dunno bout the rest of you, but i LOVED this story...well done man, well done...screw the typos 10/10, please continue
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scope
11:27 am | April 27, 2003
8.5/10 I would have givin it a 9 but typos told me not to, otherwise very nicely writin.
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Cpt Crapper
3:30 am | April 27, 2003
Nice story.... shoulda used the gunships first....
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Steele
12:14 am | April 27, 2003
I do read everything, throughly , or else I wouldn't put a grade on it. Most of the stuff here is 8/10 level though, if it's higher or lower I grade properly.
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AlphaBravo343
12:09 am | April 27, 2003
Well, I really meant like repeating the same phrase, like when I talked about the tunnels in the mountain toward the beginning. It really bothered me, and I got the idea for the gunships from the game G-Police.
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Ishkabibbl
11:04 am | April 26, 2003
Damn, I was thinking about using gunships in my next story, alas you beat me to it. Good story.
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James Kinsella
1:46 am | April 26, 2003
As I read the first few lines all I could think was, "Deep, Man." On a lighter note, I thought it was a good story. Keep it up.
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John Morris
10:37 pm | April 25, 2003
Steele you hand out more 8/10's than christian missionarys hand out the word of god, take some time and read it! as for the author decent job, yet typos did hold you back, yet a rivveting story language, also I've said it once and I'll say it again, change up the language, try not to use the same descriptive word, multiple times within a paragraph, otherwise decent job with tremendous possibilties. 7/10
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Steele
8:15 pm | April 25, 2003
It wasn't that bad, 8/10. Keep it up.
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AlphaBravo343
2:54 am | April 25, 2003
Wow, there are so many typos here its not even funny, well, that's what I get for not taking my time on the read through. And I apologize for the choppy writing, I had been up for two days when I wrote that.
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