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Comments for 'The Assult on the Control Room: Archangels squad part III'



AlphaBravo343
6:36 pm | April 9, 2003
you're into details, hmm.
Sarge
8:27 pm | April 7, 2003
Is a word would complete me last thought.

What I'm saying is you put sarge over and over and its Sarge ok?...
AlphaBravo343
1:53 am | April 7, 2003
not really sure what you're saying, but how did you like the story?
Sarge
12:03 am | April 7, 2003
Why do all these people insist its sarge?

If your referring to sarge like a name its Sarge which you were doing. If your not Sergeant is still a rank and is still capitalized... However, your pesky spell checker wont catch this because it doesn't think Sarge
AlphaBravo343
8:40 pm | April 6, 2003
Im working on another concept for a story, i hope you liked my first shot at writing a fanfic, this series is over by the way.
James Kinsella
1:48 am | April 6, 2003
As usual, an excellent story. I hope you keep them coming!


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