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			| someone 7:39 pm | December 19, 2003
 so far i havent seen any positive comments on this poem so i wont stop it now. The poem was nice and all but if you spelt faith wrong on purpose then you are a loser and if you really dont know how to spell faith then you're a dumb@$$
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			| crashedwarthog 2:18 am | October 1, 2003
 who are you calling a nobody ish? i've contributed to this site to so dont call me a nobody
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			| Jamirus99 6:39 pm | September 30, 2003
 Ish, if you feel these poems are good, that's great. i think they're trash, and trash with mis-spelled titles.
 
 ....Carry on.
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			| Sergeant B 12:30 am | September 30, 2003
 Hey Scribe! Look! You mispelled people! PEOPLE, not ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
 *HhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaHaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa*
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			| Ishkabibbl 9:18 pm | September 29, 2003
 Why do nobody's make fun of good authors?
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			| Walker 8:24 pm | September 29, 2003
 Yes, besides the obvious drawback, this one was another good poem. But the obvious problem was there, so it pretty much screwed any chance of this poem sounding good. If you resubmitted a corrected version of this, it would do a lot for this peice. Good luck.
 
 Semper Fi
 
 -Walker
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			| The Scribe 3:38 pm | September 29, 2003
 Hey, ppl make mistakes.  But that's okay.  I'm not really sure if you meant to mispell faith, because I've read previous stories of your's and they're very good.  Just write your story in WORD and then post it, so that way your mistakes for spelling can be checked.
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			| The Scribe 3:38 pm | September 29, 2003
 Hey, ppl make mistakes.  But that's okay.  I'm not really sure if you meant to mispell faith, because I've read previous stories of your's and they're very good.  Just write your story in WORD and then post it, so that way your mistakes for spelling can be checked.
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			| riot 1:53 pm | September 29, 2003
 oh my god.  you misspelled the title of the poem!  you're such a loser.
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			| Mainevent 10:42 am | September 29, 2003
 Never give up on me
 Never lose faith in me
 Never turn your back on me
 
 I'm just getting started
 
 Fighting an endless battle
 Never giving up hope
 Fearless to death itself
 
 I'm doing my part
 
 Defeat is everlasting
 Victory is scarce
 Death is for ever
 
 I'm losing
 
 After I fall to the bloody ground
 I step back up
 Never giving up
 
 I am a Marine; have faith in me
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			| crashedwarthog 10:10 am | September 29, 2003
 ITS FAITH!! NOT FATH!  F.A.I.T.H
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