halo.bungie.org

They're Random, Baby!

Fan Fiction


Comments for 'And So It Began.'



Hidden Assassin
11:08 am | July 24, 2003
Having some grammar troubles yourself, 'Nosolee? Good original story here.
Ishkabibbl
2:11 am | July 24, 2003
everyone said grammer, me think he now know grammer not good.
HunterKiller
9:03 pm | July 23, 2003
little problem with the grammar but otherwise good. 8.5/10
'Nosolee
7:03 pm | July 23, 2003
Yeah, grammer was a little problem, but it your was good.9/10
Steele
6:30 pm | July 23, 2003
There's a lot of grammer problems here, but they can be fixed. Otherwise the story seemed good and original.


bungie.org