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Comments for 'The Tour (part 3)'



Dispraiser
11:44 pm | March 22, 2003
I read part one... I posted a comment... I never got any comments to one of my fanfics though...
TheRedFaction
9:06 pm | March 22, 2003
Ughh...I just posted three stories and nobody has read'em yet! Come on, show a little decency people!

TheRedFaction
Dispraiser
8:15 pm | March 22, 2003
I have another thing to say. It is bulding on the last. The series it constantly one upping the last part. It is something like the "I can do anything better tha you thing"... Who will win, the odd parts or the even ones - no one knows, but the real winners are the readers...
gruntkiller
12:45 pm | March 19, 2003
great the same as the ones before but still refreashing among all the other stuff here
Tank
10:43 am | March 19, 2003
UH! I MISSED ONE BY TM!!!
This is a realy cool new twist on a series, and it's as great as all the other work u did before!
Dispraiser
3:56 am | March 19, 2003
*Franticly searches for something to complain about*

I guess it's the end of my long honored reputation (self proclaimed though locke helped with this one... I think it was him) of always being able to complain... Can I use the indent thing again?
TheRedFaction
2:01 am | March 19, 2003
Another excellent piece of literature. Keep it up, Traumatised Marine!

TheRedFaction
Steele
1:00 am | March 19, 2003
Ahhh...continuing excellence. Refreshing and enjoyable(like the others)!


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