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Comments for 'The Minds That Make War (Part 2, final chapter)'



Pesticide
5:02 pm | July 31, 2003
Truly a work of art.
AlphaBravo343
3:20 am | March 13, 2003
sorry, i double posted
AlphaBravo343
3:13 am | March 13, 2003
this is very intruiging, i love your writing style, and i wish you could continue stories like this. It would also be cool if you could compile your stories and have them published in a halo book with the stories in it. I hope the views expressed in this story do not reflect your own. I, as a christian, have always hoped that humans would win in this holy war with the covenant(because, after all, thats what it is) The insight into the past of the covenant and the absorbtion of the other forerunner descendants intruiges me, how the humans were also a descendant and such. I felt pride when you said that the prophet was suprised when he discovered that the humans had discovered everything on their own, and it made me appreciate human ingenuity. I loved the story and keep up the good work! Also, as a side note, does anyone else get the eerie feeling that earth will be destoyed in Halo2?
AlphaBravo343
3:13 am | March 13, 2003
this is very intruiging, i love your writing style, and i wish you could continue stories like this. It would also be cool if you could compile your stories and have them published in a halo book with the stories in it. I hope the views expressed in this story do not reflect your own. I, as a christian, have always hoped that humans would win in this holy war with the covenant(because, after all, thats what it is) The insight into the past of the covenant and the absorbtion of the other forerunner descendants intruiges me, how the humans were also a descendant and such. I felt pride when you said that the prophet was suprised when he discovered that the humans had discovered everything on their own, and it made me appreciate human ingenuity. I loved the story and keep up the good work! Also, as a side note, does anyone else get the eerie feeling that earth will be destoyed in Halo2?
Traumatised Marine
8:46 am | March 10, 2003
Guy in armour? What, the Elite?

And Monitor 101, that's about as long as I can send something, the fan fic form restricts you to an entry size of 30k or less.
Wowser
5:35 am | March 10, 2003
Pretty good! Gives a good background story on the covenant and y there goin round startin fights.
monitor101
3:15 am | March 10, 2003
Too short.
Dirty Commie
10:32 pm | March 9, 2003
That was odd.

Well, ditto for what I wrote for Part 1. But what was the point of the guy in armor? Meh.
Tank
4:23 pm | March 9, 2003
That was awesome! It's a shame this is the final chapter.


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