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Comments for 'Scope (Chapter 5, An Ice Cube's Chance in Hell)'



spectre
4:33 am | May 2, 2004
so many crazy people together can't be good, or can it?
Nick Kang
6:54 pm | April 30, 2004
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!! You beat me too it...I was gonna highlight it on a Flood's life. Oh well, I copyright my idea.

NK
The Silver Spartan
2:51 pm | April 30, 2004
Hey! Guess what? I just finished the Prologue for the --First ever-- story in an Infection Form's P.O.V.! I am submitting it now!!! Now I have 2 series'! Woh hoo! Hope you guys like it!

The Silver Spartan
Mainevent
11:31 am | April 30, 2004
Yea. I understand it's not necessarily a time to be happy and all, but I also understand that I'd rather have 6 friends with me than 6 guys I don't know, and thinking my friends are dead.
The Silver Spartan
5:54 pm | April 29, 2004
Thanks NK, Mainevent, Koop 117, and Helljumper!
Umm.. I will consider your suggestions, Thanks!
And Helljumper I was trying to make it like Mainevent said, they were just happy to see each other. But thanks for pointing it out.

I'm waiting for more stories from you guys too!
Mainevent, nice poem, looking forward to more from you!

ODST nice job on Sgt. Vick Ch. 3!

NK, nice I thought it was the beginning of the E3 vid!
Mainevent
10:42 am | April 29, 2004
They also just found more marines, and ones that they know personally. That is a cause for rejoicing right there.

It's all part of the mysterious human brain's way of thinking.
Helljumper
3:27 am | April 29, 2004
ok, now, the humans just lost a shit load of marines and these people are in enemy territory and just smiling and laughing like everything is good, they don't act like soldiers but more like kids with guns, come on now.

ODST
Mainevent
12:38 am | April 29, 2004
The phrase you're thinking of is: Out of the frying pan and into the fire.
Koop117
12:34 am | April 29, 2004
Good job.

How bout, out of the frying pan, into hell.
?
Whatever

Good job on the story
Mainevent
12:03 am | April 29, 2004
I don't have writers block. I have the opposite. Writer's cramps. Happens with too many good ideas for how a story could go cram into your head at once.
Mainevent
12:03 am | April 29, 2004
Not terribly bad. Not bad at all.

He checked his Scanner and replied. "Ah! There's a science ship with Slipspace Drives good, Oh wait, bad they are not fully functional, are any of you good at mechanics?"

That was a little choppy and wierd.

He checked his scanner and replied, "Ah! There's a science ship with functioning slipspace drives. Damn, they're not fully functional. Are any of you good at mechanics?"

That's how I would have done it. Otherwise it was good.

And other titles for your story:
Hell in a handbasket.
It's goin straight to hell.
It's hot as hell in here. (A trap situation)
Oh hell!
Aww Hell!
One hell of a day.
What the hell? (Finding something out is probably best here)
Holy Hell (Prophet section probably best for this one)
Nick Kang
8:20 pm | April 28, 2004
You have writers block, I have writers block, a bunch more people have writers block, lately it seems as if everyone has writers block.

NK
The Silver Spartan
8:18 pm | April 28, 2004
Sorry if this sucked, I have a bad cold and had writers block...

The Silver Spartan


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