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Comments for 'Air Force Wing: Part 3, Consequences'



Capo Rip
4:52 am | February 6, 2004
Good, tho needed a bit more proof-reading. And yeah, what rank is Harman?
Helljumper
2:30 am | February 3, 2004
it was good, but a pilot who are all officers wouldn't call another pilot "boy." thats more for the marines and privates
teemus
10:25 pm | February 1, 2004
Thnx Cold. I do have an explanation running.
CoLd BlooDed
8:28 pm | February 1, 2004
Hey Chechen, its teemus's story so just let him do what he wants. He'll probably explain why that guy went crazy in another few stories...
teemus
1:38 am | February 1, 2004
Thnx Awacar. =)
Awacar
8:17 pm | January 31, 2004
Good, as usual. I like this series.
teemus
12:13 pm | January 31, 2004
Hes suposed to be insane =)
Chechen_Fighter
12:09 pm | January 31, 2004
I like the beginning, but whats up with the levi dude going nuts and ramming one of his own. At least he can take out on Covenant not his own people? Come on lets keep it straight forward


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