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Comments for 'Taking Halo: Chapter 3, Bullets, Missiles and Plasma' |
Steele
10:55 pm | May 5, 2003
It seems that whenever I get a story posted, the very next day a bunch of fanfics jump up to take it's place, pushing it down to the bottom.
I need to stop leading the bloody charges...
Let someone else order, "Fix bayonets!" and run screaming at the enemy waving his claymore around like a dummy...
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scope
11:54 am | May 5, 2003
9.5/10 Nice job
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John Morris
11:08 am | May 5, 2003
This story is exactly what it says at the begining fecal mattr, no I'm kidding excellent work, Well written, while I don't believe it's a 10/10 quality, some wording holding it back, I can find nothing else wrong with it steel awsome job, 9/10, I'm a relativily new writer on here, and hopefully, I'll be able to give you a run for your money, but for now, your like ps2 sales to the XBOX. )Don't take into account quality, I'm saying sales only, yes PS2 sucks.) keep it up!
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Steele
10:51 am | May 5, 2003
Thanks.
To John Morris: I realized I could have written this one more fluently, but when I wrote most of this I wasn't in one of my 'writing moods.' When I'm in one of my 'writing moods,' (which is about once every few days) I can really write up a storm. But, usually when I'm in my writing moods I don't get to use the computer. Basically when I wrote the majority of this, I wasn't up to 100% writing ability; more around 80%.
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monitor101
2:38 am | May 5, 2003
Holy shit that was good!
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Jaywhit10
12:41 am | May 5, 2003
God damn, this was a well written story in my though. I noticed some things with it that seemed like something else i read, no big deal anyways. This seems better then anything i have read in along time, better then most of the parts from all my different series. Good job, keep it up
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pooman
8:26 pm | May 4, 2003
good story, 10/10 good job!
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Havok
8:02 pm | May 4, 2003
i liked it a lot. especially the fighter action. good work.
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Boa
7:39 pm | May 4, 2003
I liked it, it was a good story.
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Cpt Crapper
7:33 pm | May 4, 2003
Its a good story... liked it
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Steele
4:53 pm | May 4, 2003
Please read and COMMENT. Thankyou.
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