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Comments for 'Taking Halo: Chapter One, Hot Drop' |
James Kinsella
1:30 am | April 16, 2003
That wan't too ominous.
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Steele
9:25 pm | April 15, 2003
Yes, join Bungie's underground army (ssshhh! keep it on the down-low). There is strenght in numbers. Strike now and the world is ours. Without a series reformation (Plus full nuclear release on all those foriegn bastards, well most of 'em.) Earth will become nothing more than a sorry magget infested dried-out husk of what used to be. We dragging ourselves toward oblivion.
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monitor101
3:25 pm | April 15, 2003
Well Steele your not alone. I'm also grounded from the computer so I use it at night and my girlfriend is calling me all the time so I can barely get enough time to write a story. Good job!
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Traumatised Marine
10:55 am | April 15, 2003
Excellent, a radical-minded dictator is just what we need to reform the system to avoid the impending crisis that the world will suffer this century.
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Steele
10:50 am | April 15, 2003
It'll be a while before I send in the next one. First I haven't even got started on it yet. Second, it was raining hard in good ol' North Carolina the past few weeks and I've got a few large yards to mow. Plus, I keep getting grounded from the computer, and my mom keeps having to use it to do her homework for college. The only time I can use it is at school, but I've got an evil conspirital plot in the works for world domination. (Well not quite.)
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Traumatised Marine
8:22 am | April 15, 2003
Excellent... yup, excellent.
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James Kinsella
4:15 am | April 15, 2003
Wow, A Dramatis Personae, I haven't seen one of those since I read All Quiet On The Western Front. It looked very good. I hope you send the next one in soon.
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thoridan
2:56 am | April 15, 2003
really good the only part that i dident like is when they said the F word and one more thing those suits kinda down size the spartans but i can tell that this sceries is gona get better and better keep ti up.
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LordofDestruction
10:44 pm | April 14, 2003
Good job, Steele. 9.0/10
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Shadow Spartan
9:30 pm | April 14, 2003
Office of Naval Intelligence
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Dirty Commie
7:55 pm | April 14, 2003
What's ONI?
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Shadow Spartan
5:44 pm | April 14, 2003
well done steele, well done, this was really good. i liked it, i give it a 9/10, keep it up
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Spatan-13
5:44 pm | April 14, 2003
i agree, a good story, hands down. keep it up steele, this is good stuff. 9/10
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Steele
2:36 pm | April 14, 2003
I know alot of people read the comments before readnig the story, so I implore you to read this one. It took more time to format than to write(Exaggeration!) But I believe you'll like it. Hopefully.
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