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Comments for 'The Lost Spartan (Chapter 6)' |
Archangels Blade
10:44 pm | July 7, 2002
Don't worry, ATM, we do. It's just that we constantly have to remind him that he has to take his time. He always rushes.
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ATM Machine103
12:00 pm | July 7, 2002
Everybody is right: it's too fast. But give the guy some credit, yo.
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Archangels Blade
6:00 pm | July 6, 2002
Spartan415, you really need to slow down. In these past two comments of yours, you just blurred right by me. Chill, and slow down.
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Spartan415
3:02 pm | July 6, 2002
Jaywhit it's both and i did use the EX thing from you i think long time ago and the cannon of a Wraith is so slow and a fuel rod cannon is dodgable plus the banshee can take out a wraith with its fuel rod cannon
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Spartan415
3:02 pm | July 6, 2002
I know i'm going fast but thats the way i type and i can't help it but i'm really sorry. And Jaywhit10 its PX
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Jaywhit10
11:29 am | July 6, 2002
I have to agree with them, a few things nag at me. How the heck could a Banshee blow wraiths apart. It ain't that manuverable and all it would take is one fuel rod cannon or the wraiths cannon would turn it into scrap, im not saying that it happened. One other thing which one is it PX or EX. If it's EX you and me need a little talk.
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Archangels Blade
7:53 pm | July 5, 2002
Man, im sorry to say it, but the other ones were better. You really rushed this one, and i had a hard time understanding what happened at some points. Slow it down, take your time, and write like your favorite author if it helps. Keep the series running, though, and don't get discouraged.
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Knightmare Wolf
3:05 pm | July 5, 2002
Tough to read at some points, keep it smooth, and tone a few things down
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saturn
2:53 am | July 4, 2002
intresting but everything happens so fast sometimes i get confused. Its good though.
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nobody
2:53 am | July 4, 2002
that was awfly fast. So much happens so quickly.
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