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Comments for 'Guerrilla defense -Part One- New York Is Going Down'



Helljumper
11:40 am | June 2, 2004
I meant Sergeants are not saluted

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romac1991
9:02 pm | June 1, 2004
Well it was kinda of like my story but with not a lot of detail, and that whole fire part seemed liked a rip off of when I doused the ground with fuel and ignited it when the covenant crossed. All in all it wasn't terribly bad, but it lacked detail and the battle scenes weren't described well enough.

6/10



romac1991
Helljumper
3:50 pm | June 1, 2004
First of all use the code. Second Sergeant is always capitalzied, second Sergeant's are saluted. Third, where are all the officers Fourth, have you ever been to New York City, where are the Covenant marching from. What part of NYC? Please don't continue this series.

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Payne
9:16 pm | May 30, 2004
boooo


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