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Comments for 'Not Your Ordinary Halo Fan-Fic (Comedy)'



Shawn
11:15 am | April 29, 2004
I thoght it needed some work. Some parts were funny but is definetly not hystirecal. overall it was good.
Anonymous
2:58 pm | April 26, 2004
Kind of funny could use a little work though
halofan the great
8:47 am | April 26, 2004
it was very funny, sos much so, i was cryin
MasterCD
12:14 am | April 26, 2004
I'm not talking to you, Nick, I'm talking to the guy who wrote this story! Isn' that what the comments are for?
New001
2:36 am | April 25, 2004
I like el fudge cookies and chocolate sundays and happy days and those new M&M's and this story.
'Nosolee
8:00 pm | April 24, 2004
One question though...is Vick a Gangster as in mobster or as in durag gangsta?
'Nosolee
2:27 pm | April 24, 2004
Hey, ew setile nac eb tneulf oot...

All we have to do is speak backwards. ;)
Nick Kang
11:20 am | April 24, 2004
Well, ya know, my name isn't really Nick Kang, Nick Kang is a police officer in a game I have called True Crimes: Streets of LA. It used to be my favorite game, so I named myself after it.
MC's Cousin
11:02 am | April 24, 2004
*ehem* MASTER CHIEF's Cousin, or maybe it's 'Nosolee?

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MCC
Nick Kang
10:17 am | April 24, 2004
I like my name...
MasterCD
2:44 am | April 24, 2004
Really creative name (snort). But I'm not here to diss your name. Okay story, different, yeah, which is kinda good. But a fluent Elite? Hmmm...
Nick Kang
8:53 pm | April 23, 2004
Who, you mean me?
Ishkabibbl
6:11 pm | April 23, 2004
The person named after the video game char has a point...
someone that you dont know
11:45 am | April 23, 2004
........... If u stooges are going to discuss stuff about Cold then do it on the forum. Otherwise i only want critisism here. BTW I like Cold's stuff but it doesnt make me pee.
CoLd BlooDed
2:22 am | April 23, 2004
Oh yeah, I read this this morning. It was okay, didn't really make me laugh, or pee... ;)

Good job, though, quality reading, keep it up.
CoLd BlooDed
2:22 am | April 23, 2004
Sorry for the hold-up, SYDK, but the whole "piss your pants" thing was a joke, kindof, I'll comment in a sec...
Mainevent
1:08 am | April 23, 2004
I'd comment on your story, but I don't know you. And my mommy told me not to talk to strangers.
'Nosolee
10:24 pm | April 22, 2004
Mainevent puts up a good question...

However I'll look to the glass half full and say that he's growed(or GROWN for those nitpickey ppl, j/k)
Mainevent
9:34 pm | April 22, 2004
CoLd is all growed up. Then again, is he growed up or have all the good writers just left? ;)

I'm just messing with you CoLd. You have improved A LOT since I first started coming here. I'm very surprised, because many people just keep on sucking. They eventually suck so much they go into a blackhole spiral and disappear. Anywhoo, I didn't read this story, just wanted to rant onwards about cold.

CURRENTLY READING: A Signal Shattered by Eric Nylund.

Rating: A+
Nick Kang
9:18 pm | April 22, 2004
Ishkabibbl, you always seem to focus on the glass of water being half empty.
Ishkabibbl
8:53 pm | April 22, 2004
What? Nobody's bitten this author's head off for the format? GASP!
MC's Cousin
7:14 pm | April 22, 2004
*MCC chuckles nervously*

I was just kiddin' you know, well, mostly anyway.
Yeah, I like your serious stuff just as much (except it gives my heart [and pants] warmth when people include me in their stories. Am I the only one?).

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MCC
'Nosolee
6:21 pm | April 22, 2004
I can still remember in the summer, when CoLd was new and only got 1-3 comments per fanfic, usually one was mine. Now hes making kids pee their pants. CoLd ::snivel:: you're all growed up.
CoLd BlooDed
1:46 pm | April 22, 2004
It was okay, not really funny, but keep tryin'. :)
CoLd BlooDed
1:46 pm | April 22, 2004
I can? Coolio. But remember, I write serious stuff, too. ;)
MC's Cousin
12:54 pm | April 22, 2004
*MCC's voice echos into nothingness*

Whoa, kinda cavarnous in here. Empty too.
Well anyway. It was kinda funny. A little too much in places but, still, it made me smile and almost laugh (but only CoLd can make me wet my pants!)

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MCC


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