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Comments for 'Attack on Sol (Part 11)'



Slit Throat
9:00 pm | July 3, 2004
Hey, everyone is entitled to their own opinion.

Maybe the Covenant will be more of a challenge when fighting on their own turf (hint, hint).

BTW, the next part should be in by the update after next.
FOrunnER
4:26 pm | July 3, 2004
The below was an overview of the series in general.
FOrunnER
4:17 pm | July 3, 2004
Well, Im kinda going against the grain here, but I didn't really like.

I mean it was good, but the Covenant just seemed to...weak. I like stories based off Legendary mode. Sorry.
Dave Luck
11:00 am | July 3, 2004
My monitor has been behaving in a most peculiar fashion as of late.

It is with great difficulty that I have been able to read anything on my computer, but so far, it's legible and clear.

Anyhow, I like stories with no action - many writers smother their stories in blood and violence to make up for their poor writing styles. I know this is Halo, but then again, there should be some different areas. Excellent job at capturing the reader.

- Dave.
Hunter_Killer
1:51 am | July 3, 2004
Well, well, well........so there still is a few good stories around. I loved the flow of this story, slit throat. You have great potential.

9.5/10

(he,he,he, my big comeback!)
343 Salty Beans
3:05 pm | July 2, 2004
Awesome, as usual. You've got me hooked, this is one of my favorite series going around right now (besides my own, of course :) ). Anyway, keep on rockin' and bringing out good stories.

343SB

PS:hunter, if the series stops, I'll come with you, and we can force-feed him one thousand bottles of pepto-bismol while we're at it.
Slit Throat
2:56 pm | July 2, 2004
The next part has a lot of action (obviously), and don't worry hunter that dances, this story going to keep going for a long time.
The NEW Zak
1:35 pm | July 2, 2004
Always love the cliffhangers. Also liked the dialogue scene of the story.
Chuckles
5:53 am | July 2, 2004
It takes skill to write a dialogue scene that long . . . and have me enjoy it. Excellent writing.

C.T. Clown
hunter that dances
2:27 am | July 2, 2004
not really action packed, but i always do like a cliffhanger story.


if the series stops, i swear i am going to track you down and force you to write more, lol
Shifty
7:30 pm | July 1, 2004
You never seem to disapoint ST... no action... no problem. The build up of the story made up for it. It makes me feel that this is what I'll be doing on November 9th... keep them coming

Shifty


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