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Comments for 'The Renegade Marines Part V - The Assault'



Jehkoh
6:20 pm | March 16, 2002
Yo, playa, that's crunk, dawg. Lol, kidding. But seriously, nice action. Elaborate more on the firefights, though.
Jaywhit10
12:06 pm | March 15, 2002
Ya it was ok i liked it but u needed more things though
Shadow
3:15 am | March 15, 2002
Like what? Always trying to get better!-shadow
Shadow
8:44 pm | March 14, 2002
I thought it was a descent assault...but I'm sure most of you think my work is a piece of crap...well maybe it is. :(-shadow


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