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Comments for 'Behind Enemy Lines'



Sentinel
1:44 am | April 2, 2004
Finally! Someone else notices what I've been saying my whole damn LIFE!
SOS.Odin
10:12 pm | April 1, 2004
ppl are so mean :D
Thingy
9:54 pm | April 1, 2004
SHITSHITSHITSHIT oh and did I mention COMPLETE AND UTTER BULLSHIT ROLLED IN SEWAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wiley
1:19 am | April 1, 2004
*not
stupid keyboard.......where's me mallet?
Wiley
1:19 am | April 1, 2004
*note
grrrr..
sorry about that....
Wiley
1:15 am | April 1, 2004
What paragraph BlackGhost? There are no paragraphs to speak of.


Scorpion, You suck. Plain & simple.
0/10

About as enjoyable as explosive diahrrea (not: not from personal experiance....i think.....)
Sentinel
1:10 am | April 1, 2004
I couldn't even read the first word it was so jumbled up.
SOS.Odin
9:00 pm | March 31, 2004
hurry up w/that chapt helljumper
and this story wasnt all that great
read other folks' stuff and the books
then come back
BlackGhost
11:26 am | March 31, 2004
I got to the first paragraph and then stopped. Sheer and utter crap.
Helljumper
2:31 am | March 31, 2004
Don't mess with my ODST, when will these noobies learn

PS my new chapter coming out soon
The Collector
12:41 am | March 31, 2004
Damn... Fix this up reallllllll quick tsk tsk tsk. I am shocked by ur lack of... Damn it just stinks...
CoLd BlooDed
12:39 am | March 31, 2004
Helljumper, I think he already did screw up your ODST's . . .
Helljumper
5:31 pm | March 30, 2004
Your grammer needs improvement and you don't use the code. No one is really going to read this, crap u didn't even proof read it.

ODST
First to rise last to fall
Helljumpers do it all

PS You have Helljumpers in your story don't mess up with my Helljumpers


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