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Comments for 'Discovery of an Enemy, Chapter Two: Part III' |
CoLd BlooDed
11:11 am | July 16, 2004
Woah, I liked how you delivered that surprise. There were several typos and grammatical errors, but they were all minor. As Helljumper said, this just got a whole lot more interesting. Brings a lot of questions to mind, it does.
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russ687
9:23 pm | May 27, 2004
Security Circle is a common phrase....and so is perimeter. Neither is technically wrong or right.
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snowy duck
8:06 pm | May 27, 2004
1 thing, security circle? next time say perimeter =D
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Nick Kang
7:19 pm | May 27, 2004
Woohoo! It doesn't seem like Vick was coming to an end.
As for the story, it was very good, captured me with the first few sentences. Great detail.
NK
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Helljumper
10:08 pm | May 26, 2004
I submitted the last part to my Sergeant Vick series, I hope you guys enjoy it.
ODST
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Spacefan
5:20 pm | May 26, 2004
Dammit I hate being left in suspense like that. Get on with the show!
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russ687
3:30 pm | May 26, 2004
Where's all the postings? oh well.... :)
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Helljumper
3:02 pm | May 26, 2004
It just got a whole lot more interesting
ODST
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