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Comments for 'First Contact; Chapter 5: War in Space'



bloodsoldier4
7:26 am | August 19, 2003
very nice i dont care about the mac cannons or the sheilds on a ratein of 1-10 i give this 26
Fleet Admiral
1:51 am | August 19, 2003
Good. Good space battles and fighter battles. The only mistakes I can see are that the shilds on the Covenant ships are too weak in your story, and that the UNSC fleet ships cannot support Super MAC's. Over all great. 10/10!


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