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Comments for 'Civilian Assault, pt. Two- Beginning of a Suicide Mission' |
SOS.Odin
10:19 pm | April 1, 2004
and how bout some folks post on me Neverland :D
not much folks reading it :(
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CoLd BlooDed
3:45 pm | March 31, 2004
Nah, we've just been voting for older (or current) series, like Helljumpers "Battle for Tectron" and my "The Strive to Survive". Odin has his "Neverland", 'Nosolee has his "Fall of Fate", and teemus has his "Fall of Rye".
Anyways, if you guys go to b.net at all, check out Spec. Ops. United, 'tis my chapter. THEN JOIN DAMMIT!
Besides, you can vote. ;)
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SOS.Odin
11:33 am | March 31, 2004
*cough* no vote for me :D
great story man
ill had to go read the first one after this
keep it up
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teemus
3:27 am | March 31, 2004
I really liked it. You should make em longer though, the detail level was nice. 9.5/10
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Nick Kang
2:38 am | March 31, 2004
I want YOU to vote for Operation: Stingray! lol j/k. I probably don't stand a chance against Helljumper and CoLd BlooDed.
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Agent Shade
10:28 pm | March 30, 2004
*cough* vote for me, jokes
impressive ONI, keep it up
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CoLd BlooDed
2:26 am | March 30, 2004
Hey Helljumper, we're conducting a poll over at my bungie.net chapter in "What's your favourite fan fiction series on HBO?". Guess what?
You're in the lead! :) (With me trailing behind with two votes less, oh, just you watch out!;) )
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Helljumper
5:13 pm | March 28, 2004
really good
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CoLd BlooDed
1:59 am | March 28, 2004
Good work, ONI, you haven't been here for awhile, have you?
Nonetheless, great work, a few typos but that was it, it could've been longer, but this length was still satisfying.
Have you read the latest "Strive to Survive" chapters that you missed? But anyways, keep up the good work. :D
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ONI_operative_343
4:57 pm | March 27, 2004
same here Kang! took me a few atempts to finally read your story
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Nick Kang
1:14 pm | March 27, 2004
Yeah, the Fan-Fic section kept me out for the better part of a month. I think SubNova failed for that time. As of now, Unknown Errors keep on popping up wherever I go!
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The Collector
12:35 pm | March 27, 2004
not bad at all very good. A few spelling errors but otherwise well written. Building up 2 a great "climax" :)
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spec._ops_117
5:59 am | March 27, 2004
I'm loven it! keep'm up! 9.8/10
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ONI_operative_343
4:25 am | March 27, 2004
thankx guys! to Kang: thats the coolest thing i've ever had anyone say to me! thankx man; it took me a while for a few reasons. my comp crashed a few weeks ago and i just reccently got it back, bout a few days ago. so i had part done b4 and the rest after that 'incident.' and also, the fan fic. section wouldn't let me enter it for a few days, so that slowed things down.
again, thankx everyone! part 3 is coming soon (i hope)
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Nick Kang
9:20 pm | March 26, 2004
Its about time. I've been waiting for the second part of the series. Just like FOrunnER, I give this a 9/10. Good job.
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FOrunnER
1:52 pm | March 26, 2004
Nice story, I liked the action you put in. Im also interested to see the level of information that ONI has given civilians and how much Jon knows about the Covenant.
I give this a 9/10
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