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Comments for 'Closing with the Enemy Chapter 3 Death on the Front'



monitor101
5:57 pm | November 28, 2003
Thanks for the comments!
teemus
3:33 pm | November 27, 2003
i really liked this seris it was well discribed. teh only thing is the ending seemed rushed
HunterKiller
1:21 am | November 23, 2003
This is great material monitor keep it UP!
monitor101
10:16 pm | November 21, 2003
Thanks for the comments keep them coming! Yah I will try and explain more next time.
Mainevent
10:27 pm | November 20, 2003
I always liked your stories, well, most of them. SO keep it up.
Agent Shade
9:24 pm | November 19, 2003
this was very good, your writing has improved so much. the detail that i noticed allowed me to picture the battle happening in my mind. one little minor complaint, you somewhat rushed the pick up of the Pelicans...in the future, expand a little bit, talk more about carnage and fighting, it'll impress me at least lol cheers


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