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Comments for 'The Plague Part 1' |
monitor101
9:50 pm | September 22, 2003
Thanks a million for the comments okay Isjabbibbl
and thanks for the pointers Mainevent.
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Mainevent
11:17 am | September 21, 2003
I don't mean spelling typos, I understand accents in stories, ....
Take this for example.
"Yea man he really did mess up there great job catching that."
Try:
"Yea man, he really did mess up there, great job catching that."
It makes it so much easier to read.
Good story.
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Ishkabibbl
3:20 am | September 21, 2003
Not copying, just when I read it that book shot straight up to my mind.
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pooman
9:45 pm | September 20, 2003
cool 10/10
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monitor101
8:17 pm | September 20, 2003
Thanks a lot for commenting. Iskabibbl what do you mean by The Hot Zone yah I've read Richard Preston's book more than once to get references for this series but do you mean it was like The Hot Zone or I was copying it?
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monitor101
8:17 pm | September 20, 2003
Oh ya any typos in the dialogue are usually on purpose beacause its the way people use slang which I doubbt would change even in 500 years.
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Mainevent
7:53 pm | September 20, 2003
Good Stuffs
Just one thing, put commas and stuff in your talking. It makes it hard to read when I can't figure out the natural pauses in their speech and stuff. Thanks.
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Ishkabibbl
3:34 pm | September 20, 2003
The Hot Zone.
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