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Comments for 'The Enemy Within-Chapter Seven: Ashes, Ashes, We All Fall Down' |
Jenkins
6:39 pm | May 15, 2004
Pure art dude!! I can't say this enough: You are one descriptive kid. Those fight scenes were so gore-filled, it made me hungry. Speaking of which...
...can't a kid with a tentacled hand get a sandwich around here?!
Dammit Jenkins Fire Your Weapon!!!
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Mind_Affecting_Parasite
1:44 pm | April 23, 2004
*spoilers* (for my story at least)
Hey Burny and Connie, thx for you comments.
To Connie: ah...hate to ruin the surprise, but who said Sam died?
-MAP
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Connie
9:16 pm | April 21, 2004
I agree with Burny. That was incredible. Especially when Samntha died. Damn you're good at describing savage violence! Definitely keep on writing.
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Burny
8:35 pm | April 13, 2004
Holy friggin hell of a Jesus raping man...this tory so far is awesome as hell, dude. It ranks up among my top three fiction stories at number 2.
1. "The Mis-Adventures of Master Chief" el_halo_diablo
2. "The Enemy Within" Mind_Affecting_Parasite
3. "Halo 2: The Forerunner Chronicle" Velker
I hope you've submitted something since you last submitted this. I can't fucking wait.
10/10
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Mind_Affecting_Parasite
7:33 pm | April 10, 2004
To MasterGrunt: yup, you have ta love those Flood forms. I like writing about riping them up personally, or having them rip people up.
"Holy crap I ----ed the girl" (please put word in there, but be careful what word oyu choose)
Oh and MG, don't worry, I'll get some more Grunty goodness in there soon enough.
-MAP
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MasterGrunt
9:39 pm | April 9, 2004
Nice story, keep'em coming like those flood forms.
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Mind_Affecting_Parasite
7:39 pm | April 7, 2004
Arggg...
"...you KNOW..."
-MAP
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Mind_Affecting_Parasite
7:39 pm | April 7, 2004
Thx...again!
Well, you no CoLd. Just aspiring to fill peoples pants with warmth. Ah...
-MAP
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CoLd BlooDed
1:50 pm | April 7, 2004
Sorry I didn't read this before, my schedule has also been packed... rugby, school, homework, writing my own stories, etc.
Anyways, I loved this one, the use of words is fantastic and it brings enough excitement to want to keep you reading. Great job, keep it up.
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Mind_Affecting_Parasite
10:48 pm | April 6, 2004
Thx guys...now let's see more...
To Ross: Thanks. I actually didn't really think about it when I posted. I just came up with it off the top of my head. Something my subconcious threw at me and I immidiately thought: "hey, that works, why not?
Well it turned out, that the title was very, very relevent:
First of all: I found that, well, ashes just seems to go with the feel of this chapter
Second: well, you know, darn that World History from last semester, but: the Black Plague. That's where the song "ashes, ashes, we all fall down" came from. Seeing as the Plague was a disease, or I think a virus, it kinda goes with the whole: the Flood are taking over and kicking people around, theme.
Darn my randomly spawned rambling sessions...
-MAP
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MC's Cousin
7:32 pm | April 6, 2004
Well, I'm not one for short comments. So-
-I noticed a few mistakes. Minimal spelling errors, which can be found in almost all FFs here at HBO, and to be expected and ignored. I also noticed that you said a "purple" shield came in to place over the openings. Their not blue, at least from what I have seen. They are; however, blue arounf the edges, they get more clear than purple in the center.
But, those were no biggies. Good work, best make sure you keep it up.
Signing Off
MCC
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Ross Becalick
5:18 pm | April 6, 2004
Blistering stuff, and the title was clever.
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Reiyou
12:07 am | April 6, 2004
Wow. 'Nuff Said
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Spartan81388
10:19 pm | April 5, 2004
Great Story, Keep up the good work.
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Wiley
2:24 pm | April 5, 2004
Great job.
9.7/10
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