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Comments for 'Last Fortress - Deep Strike (Chapter One)'



Walker
2:36 am | August 25, 2003
read my series, "Last of the Walking Dead"!
FOrunnER
12:45 am | August 22, 2003
I liked it, 9/10. But I'm gonna do a little advretising myself, read my new series Spartan III's
Mike
4:06 pm | August 19, 2003
Upon reading it again I thought the same thing myself. I didn't think it would be so long.
And since it's my story I might as well do some self-promotion. Make sure to read all the Last Fortress series!
Jillybean
3:41 pm | August 19, 2003
I liked this - the urgency of battle and all that was *very* good. Only thing is, I found myself skimming a little towards the end, maybe if you'd broken the formatting up a wee bit?
Anyway, I look forward to reading more


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