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Comments for 'Fafnir Chapter 1'



Jink
4:11 am | February 29, 2004
Ha, who would have seen an alliance?
Archangels Blade
10:03 pm | July 1, 2002
Dude, this was awesome! You've gotta keep this series running. And, by the way, get a title. This one DEFINATELY deserves a title.
HMHM
3:57 am | June 25, 2002
HMHM
Knightmare Wolf
10:24 pm | June 23, 2002
Humor intended in closing comments if anyone cares...? Hahehe...........LAUGH!*Silence*FROM THE CROWD: YOU SUCK!"Wha?"*Poked to death with forks, finally falling off cliff*
Knightmare Wolf
10:19 pm | June 23, 2002
I got news for you three.... Number One: ITS NOT WHAT YOU THINK!Number Two: IF I GAVE IT AWAY I'D RUIN IT!Number Three: CONSIDER OTHER THINGS! (Traps, explosives, cloaking, poor training/armament)Number Four: ITS NOT UNSTOPPABLE (What it is will be revealed in due time)Thanks for the feedback guys, I am sincere in saying this! And SPARTAN... You really think an elite swordsma could do... That much damage? I think not!*Evil Laugh*Be impossible to play halo if it did. :)
Spartan III
9:02 pm | June 23, 2002
My worst nightmare, an unstoppable elite swordsman. Great story.
Jaywhit10
10:46 pm | June 22, 2002
Nice, i like the story. A few grammer mistakes and next time, pick a title. Good story in all i'd enjoy reading the next one.


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