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Comments for 'Earths Fall? Prt: 2- The Assault'



Mind_Affecting_Parasite
4:57 pm | February 27, 2004
I'm afraid I'll have to agree. You need to practice a little more before you post again. I always have my friends read mine before I post it here, although I don't listen to what they say about it untill its on HBO. Try it!

-MAP
CoLd BlooDed
2:53 am | February 27, 2004
No, but it really did suck, I'm sorry, but it did. Writing just isn't for you if you can go by three chapters in ten paragraphs.
Anonymous
8:39 pm | February 26, 2004
Helljumper and i might seem harsh and i have to admit i was yesterday, so just take your time and i am sure we will get off your back next time
CoLd BlooDed
12:15 pm | February 26, 2004
How does three chapters go by in ten paragraphs? Get better...please.
BlackGhost
3:47 am | February 26, 2004
That was crap.
Helljumper
2:26 am | February 26, 2004
Please stop writing u suck, lieutenants commanding divisons and majors saying yes sir to lietenants, oh boy, wtf
Phalanx3580
2:06 am | February 26, 2004
cousin is right "lutenant" really turned me off, no really i am off!
MC's Cousin
5:46 pm | February 25, 2004
Even though I was lacking of time I decided to read this but decided to stop after you misspelled "lutenant". Sorry, but no.

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