Comments for 'The First Step Into A Long Fall Part 4'
Jaywhit10
2:35 am | June 5, 2002
K nice story a few things which i think you noticed them too. Keep it up and i'd like to read your next one.
james
12:30 am | June 4, 2002
hey hope ya dont mind my mistakes i wrote this late at night and didnt catch theses until reading it today for the 4th time heh other then that im commin out wiht one more then im done wiht this pice of shit series
