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Comments for 'Absolute Power Corrupts Absolutely (Phase One//Part One)'



Burny
12:09 pm | May 2, 2004
It's also the last line in the second verse of his song, but I see what you mean.
Nick Kang
12:43 pm | May 1, 2004
Actually I think the title came from the proverb:
Absolute Power Corrupts Absolutely.
lol

NK
Burny
11:51 am | April 30, 2004
Hey! I know where the title came from! Tech N9ne's song "Absolute Power", right? I LOVE that song. Pure pwnage.

Nice detail in thestory. i liked this alot. 9.5/10
Iatro
7:39 am | April 29, 2004
Thank you, everyone... this isn't my best writing, hopefully I can improve as I go with this.

Slayer Boi - ack! I didn't even catch that; serves me right for not proof-reading. It should be a plasma rifle. Spacefan already covered #2 for me...

'Nosolee - I like what you've got there, a pity there isn't more (especially with an ending like that).
GLADIATRRR3000
3:21 am | April 29, 2004
excellent details.
Nick Kang
1:55 pm | April 28, 2004
Great. The detail creates a 3-D image of the surroundings.

NK
Mainevent
11:47 am | April 28, 2004
Hey guys, go to Tom's site, www.freewebs.com/mercu and send in your stories. He's making it now. Once we get some we can start working on the basic comments section and everything.
Helljumper
9:00 pm | April 27, 2004
yea good story
'Nosolee
6:16 pm | April 27, 2004
This kinda sounds like my fanfic, written a while ago and unfinished...

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=nosolee.0505032347241.html

Great minds think alike...I hope.
Private Porter
5:38 pm | April 27, 2004
a very well done story, bravo!
Spacefan
4:42 pm | April 27, 2004
I also liked it. Visualization of the Hunter's plight was very well done--you could almost feel his pain. I assumed the plasma pistol (or rifle) was for self-defense and not combat engagements. Even if this Elite was meant to be an observer, I can't imagine anyone going into the same situation unarmed (or at least able to defend himeself). Thanks for a good story.
Slayer Boi
1:59 am | April 27, 2004
I loved it. it was very descriptive and detailed,with an excellent idea! a story from the Covenants Point of view.
However, i found two small errors with it.
1. It says that he isn't allowed to fight, but he has a plasma rifle
2. THe gun changes from a plasma rifle to a plasma pistol.
Other than that it was a great story and i can't wait to read the 2nd one.
-SB
The Collector
10:17 pm | April 26, 2004
very good. Great detail and intricate story visuals
guns_n_cars
7:33 pm | April 26, 2004
love it. the detail is great. keep it up.


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