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Comments for 'A Series of Wierd Events, Part Eight' |
FOrunnER
2:56 am | September 25, 2003
Good, I once again ask you put me in. Not a major role, just mention me in a battle scene or something.
Okay, on to the actuall storie. Its good, I like the way you give everbody there own personalitie, saying you've been here a while. And yeh it was a rip off of the Lord of the Rings, but a cool one. One last thing,I didn't really find it funny, is this story taking a more serious tone, or is it just me?
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Agent Shade
2:24 am | September 25, 2003
uhh yeah, that was a complete rip off of Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers. you really need to work on your overal structure of your story, like paragraphs and indenting. my eyes hurt after reading it after awhile. 6.5/10
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Sergeant B
1:28 am | September 25, 2003
*HAHAHAHA*
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Alpha Lance
10:57 pm | September 24, 2003
LoL...who in here wants to wrestle, I will be Goldlance.
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10:48 pm | September 24, 2003
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Hunter_Killer
10:41 pm | September 24, 2003
Drunken fool!? For that, I'll have you killed by a Grunt, if you keep up the insults! Muahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not really.
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Alpha Lance
8:27 pm | September 24, 2003
Coooooollllllll!10/10. And I can't wait for the next one. Also, I think people are starting to be greedy asking to be in everyone. But keep it. And remember, I would like to say, "Alpha 3:16, say I just kick your ass." You know, kinda like what Stone Cold Steve Austin say.
And who in her watches Wrestling? I do.
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Walker
8:24 pm | September 24, 2003
Eh, the rip off of TTT was a bit annoying. I just can't see you as a cross between Theoden and Aragorn, H_K. And I'm a bit questionable about some of the commanders you appointed, but we shall see... Anyway, a good soldier doesn't disobey orders, even from a drunken fool (i.e. Charge of the Light Brigade). Which I certainly hope you aren't. I await anxiously my last stand.
Semper Fi
-Walker
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pooman
7:35 pm | September 24, 2003
cool im alive 10/10
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Mainevent
7:15 pm | September 24, 2003
Can I be a traitorous back-stabbing sort that is a super strong boss type with only one weekness that is pointed out by a small box around the area that says weakness and then we fight, but I lose and then keep coming back bigger and stronger but you keep beating me.
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hornet34
4:10 pm | September 24, 2003
You ba***rd, I'm sitting in the library right now trying not to bust out laughing and make a scene. I WILL get you for this. Oh, and its nice to see Frogblast return, where's he been.
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Elfster
2:22 pm | September 24, 2003
I laughed my way through this.
Complete rip-off of the Two Towers and She Kept The TV, but its a funny variant, I'll give you that.
However you did make a mistake because you cant have every fan fic writer in every chapter.
And if you count all the fan fic writers today you have plenty of fighting force, so be sure to have some deaths =)
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Wiley
12:02 pm | September 24, 2003
Where am I, dammit!!!!!!!!
I want to do something heroic!!!!!!!!!!
9/10
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Mainevent
10:37 am | September 24, 2003
You..*tear*...didn't.....*sniffle*..put....me in your story....*bawling*!
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