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Comments for 'HELLJUMPERS CHAPTERS 2 and 3' |
el_halo_diablo
11:47 am | September 6, 2002
Good, small, no enemy fire.
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Spartan415
12:52 am | September 6, 2002
Now for the good, its a really good series and with the right elements you can make it great. Keep it going. The missions in the future i see for them will be great. Try to make the chapters a it bigger but all in all very good story and nice style of writing.
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Wado
12:45 am | September 6, 2002
Yes, I really like your style of writing. Keep it going at least 8 more parts. I'm interested in what missions you come up with for the characters now that the stage is almost set.
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Spartan415
12:30 am | September 6, 2002
i'm learning this too but learn to sacrifice people but you can do it in later chapters. Get a better action sequence, ODST's may be good but their not that good, and shouldn't there be more people in the hangers i mean come on. Get an arm shot or a leg shot in there but you could still make them get out.
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