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Comments for 'Halo: Liberation of Earth - Section 2' |
UNSC-StaffSGT
1:07 am | February 22, 2004
Great story, only two problems though, first of all you made the Battles scenes look like they came from Easy mode on the game(personally, i like turkey shoots but what about people who dont?)the next one isnt really a problem but... Privates flying Pelicans?
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HawkEye
5:17 pm | February 21, 2004
Ive adapted the second section which now includes a lot more detail on the battle scene's. Thanks for all the comments, guys, you've helped me improve a lot. look out for Section 3 soon!
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SOS.Odin
9:45 pm | February 19, 2004
use the code that instantly makes ur story twice as good and ya shouldnt use chapters in the middle of ur story like that it all shoulda been one big chapter wasnt bad tho and use spell check if ya got it sadly the comp i write on dosent have it and capitalize Grunt, Jackal, Elite, and Marine good job keep tryin
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MC's Cousin
6:13 pm | February 19, 2004
Well you made the fight against Covies sound like stepping on ants during the battle sceens. Try to work on that. Otherwize the storyline is alright, keep trying.
Signing Off
MCC
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