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Comments for 'Desolation' |
AlphaBravo343
10:44 pm | April 30, 2003
Did you get my e-mail about a possible collaboration between you and I? (Havok)
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Havok
10:30 pm | April 30, 2003
nope, no series. just a one time deal.
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Arthur Wellesly
9:52 pm | April 30, 2003
Good story, Havok, you have a unique writing style that I quite liked. And the story, too, is gripping. Excellent story, I trust you will continue the series.
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monitor101
7:21 pm | April 30, 2003
Pitch Back now your talking my fovorite movie someone should make a cross over og Halo and Pitch Black.
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AlphaBravo343
2:51 am | April 30, 2003
Through the beginning, I kind of got the Pitch Black planet feel. Good method of conveying emotions. I imagined a weathered and raspy voice like Lance Henriksen. Good stuff. 9.5/10
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Havok
12:47 am | April 30, 2003
traumatised marine, i dont see that as a complaint. these were feelings and emotions put into text. i didnt expect anyone to see it in quite that way. you certainly pay attention to detail my friend.
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el_halo_diablo
12:05 am | April 30, 2003
Nice work, and I see you use your name in your stories.
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scope
7:15 pm | April 29, 2003
9/10 nice very nice
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Traumatised Marine
5:04 pm | April 29, 2003
Certainly wonderfully rich and surreal descriptions.
Now no one better come snapping at me for saying this, but I wonder... many writers simply put themself in that sort of mind and begin to churn out the dreamy descriptions rather superficially. And then, then there are the minority who really are expressing complex emotions and feelings with these powerful descriptions.
It's common to see people have written stuff that sounds good but are pretty hollow, it's rarer to see genuine feelings being expressed by poetic description.
Do people get my gist?
To Havok: Sorry, this must sound like a subtle complaint- it isn't, I promise.
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monitor101
3:14 pm | April 29, 2003
Awasome sweet story well written and detailed!
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Steele
10:57 am | April 29, 2003
9/10.
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Shadow Spartan
12:02 am | April 29, 2003
so many good writers here...jesus...im speechless 10/10 hands down
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James Kinsella
6:54 pm | April 28, 2003
Wow. Powerful. I really liked the entire thing. I don't remember any other accounts of what happened to Reach after F.O.R. Your's was definetly an incredible story.
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