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Comments for 'Revolution 2 Return of the Forerunner Part 7: The Crowds' |
HoZ
5:22 pm | July 7, 2004
keep writeing dont give up plz revoltion 1 was great and this one still has promise
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gruntkiller
8:15 pm | January 31, 2003
i sorta gave up on this i had a realy good plot in mind but then i acidentally screwed it over when they were captured by the forerunner, at first i thought it was a coll idea but after it was posted i realized that i made a big mistake, im just writing this incase anyone still dosn't know why im no longer writing revolution 2 my new series fallen angel im being extra careful to make sure that i don't repeat the same mistake. please give it a chance if your mad at me for discontinuing this,
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gogmeister
2:14 am | January 12, 2003
oops ignore the 1st 'the'
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gogmeister
2:08 am | January 12, 2003
I agree that the it does seem unoriginal, but if you have such a good plot you've been talking about you better post soon before you lose all your readers.
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kyle
4:00 pm | December 30, 2002
i like. really I do. You should have been hunterkiller though.
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Anonymous
5:46 am | December 22, 2002
Umm, where did the whole gladiator thing come from???? Other then that pretty good.
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gruntkiller
7:11 pm | December 10, 2002
actualy part of it was taken from gladiator but i don't plan on keeping that way i just needed a way to get a crucial plot element(not taken from any previous sources or plagerized) and no there are goingto be any chariots im not going to reinact gladiator battles if you read it closly you may have caught the whole experiment part which will be a basses for things to come.
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Anonymous
12:45 pm | December 10, 2002
We laerned about that quote in school the emperor responded "we will see" and the gladiators refused to fight.
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Torch99
12:36 pm | December 10, 2002
"We who about to die, salute you!"
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MC Hammer
12:13 pm | December 10, 2002
Umm this seems familiar. oh wait i know, there was a movie like this. IT WAS CALLED GLADIATOR YOU PLAGARIST! You copied everything, roght down to the cuirass the emperor was wearing. Also, the quote 'you will die for the crowds came right out of the movie. let me guess, do they have to reinact a battle with aliens on chariots? You better get creative fast, before i call Ridley Scott on you!
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Halo lover
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
nooooo i loved that story just erase the lastchapter and keep going!
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