halo.bungie.org

They're Random, Baby!

Fan Fiction


Comments for 'Revolution 2 Return of the Forerunner Part 6: The Stadium'



Sarge
10:16 pm | December 3, 2002
It is rushed obviously however, teh idea is good. Your grammar however, is a different matter while I see imporvements it is very rushed. Keep working on it!
gruntkiller
8:15 pm | December 3, 2002
im hoping to have this series done by christmas, me and covert are working on some sort of super series combining our best ideas and techniques so dont be surprised if this series just dissappears its because im working on a project with much more potential


bungie.org