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Comments for 'Revolution: part 1 Allies by necessity' |
el_halo_diablo
12:09 am | August 27, 2002
The only prob with starcraft, is that your "allies" move all their forces into the center of your base and un-ally >:-(. Now that pisses me off. lol.
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Knightmare
1:55 am | August 26, 2002
Yeah, sorry to say but it was kind of weak... Like, who goes up to a rebel cruiser and says "Oh who are you?" "The MC.." "Ok lets ally." "SURE!" Sounds like a Starcraft game lol... I do hope you edit your story becuase it could have potential to be a truly great work
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grunt killer
8:20 pm | August 25, 2002
thanks ill keep that in mind i hope youll enjoy my stories more in the future
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el_halo_diablo
8:09 pm | August 25, 2002
The grunt commander should know about the UNSC if he knows about SPARTANS. It wasnt a very good story considering a lot of that was...well...nevermind that. I really hope your next one is better, and spell check or read over your story considering all the errors you made on the story. I'm sure you'll get better(your a newb...right?) and hopefully I'll grow to appreciate your stories.
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gruntkiller
7:42 pm | August 25, 2002
he never ate while he was on halo either and cryo tubes too
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Shadow
7:24 pm | August 25, 2002
It was ok, but how the hell did MC survive in the Longsword for two years if he didn't come in contact with any Covenant colonies or Earth? I mean, he doesn't have too many provisions in that fighter, if any at all.
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grunt killer
7:10 pm | August 25, 2002
im just starting but the series will pick up pace
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