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Comments for 'The Battle of Evermore Part 2: Break'



gruntkiller
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
sry this ones so short some stuff came up and realy slowed me down writing it, so ive expanded the series 1 chapter to make up for the lost material in this one
Turkish
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
ney bad tbh
hornet34
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
I still really like this series, just don't rush it if you don't have time. This one seemed to have a hurried feel to it. But other than that, keep it up.
gruntkiller
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
thanks, i was rushed to put this out usualy stuff like what happned dosent come up, in life to slow me down writing that is
Me
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Uhhh....The battle of evermore is a led zeppelin song and it is about the return of the king in the lord of the rings sereis.......
anonymous
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Its really good (someone watched the Two Towers, jk). But I like it alot--keep it up!
gruntkiller
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
yeah i know its a led zepplin song i was listening to it when i was writing, i saw the two towers AFTER i started writing
hornet34
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Since we're on the topic, a lot of Led Zepplin songs have influences from the Lord of the Rings. Listen to (I think) Ramble On and you'll here a very easy one to pick up on. From memory, I think part of the verse goes

Because in the Darkest depths of Mordor,
I met a girl so fair,
But Gollum, and the Evil One,
Crept up and slipped away with her,
Alpha Lance
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Nice Grunt Killer. But your missing some dialog. And I will give you a, 9.5/10. And like I always say, check out my series, 'Halo Trilogy'. And not to forget my peoms.

Alpha Lance
Creator of Halo Trilogy©
gruntkiller
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
yup thanks this series dosent have much room for dialog the way im planning it to play out
FOrunnER
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Great, 9/10. Despite what alot of other people like, I like these all-action series. Please read my series, Spartan III's, and give your advice GruntKiller
gruntkiller
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
thanks ill check out your series forerunner
DUDE
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
I dont think you need dialog as long as you write as well as you did in this piece. Your story is very interesting.
gruntkiller
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
thanks alot the next ones near done ill probobly send it in tomorrow


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